Introducing House... Amazing House

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BlBKQcYM3Tk

As part of my introduction, I would like to end with an introduction of Lotte's house.
The house is a remarkable aspect of the croft and very striking.
Within this short clip, I have tried to introduce the house as you would wander and visit it. The idea would be to enter the balcony leading from a clip of the living room interior.

What I tired to capture:
I tried to give a feel for what it's like toi be in the space. It's how I imagine it, how I see the overall image of the house in my head. I acknowledge the bolts that hold it together, I see the view from the balcony and I see the house as a whole. I tried to piece these little sections together to give an idea of what the house is.
I also tried various transitions when cutting the video together. Some looked cheesy, others were too harsh. I used a dissolve transition and think it wourks quite well.
Where to cut has been an issue. Some clips blend quite well, though some seem to jump unnaturally to the clip. I will try a few other techniques involving transitions and when the footage is cut to try and solve this.