Opening?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xPDLoI6bwFQ&feature=youtu.be

This clip is trying to express Lotte's personality without giving too much away. She loves walking and nature, hence the maps and shots of the countryside.
The problem with this is, it's too linear. There's no mystery, it's spoon feeding the audience. This could be appropriate for a different section of the documentary, though for the opening it doesn't have enough of an impact to catch the viewers attention and set them up for the documentary they are about to see.